Untainted Love

June 20, 2010 · 5 comments

in Art

This is a freshly written piece, I had the honor to co-write with this special poet Miskia (follow her on twitter here for 140 characters long poems). She illuminate my time-line with her short poems. What I like with this woman it’s her way of using simple words and turning them into magical and beautiful expressions. The next generation of poets will praise her work. This morning she tweeted this and got me inspired to write. I just asked her to kindly co-write with me. And believe it or not she agreed. I’ll never be that thankful enough to her for accepting my request. I’ll let you enjoy and appreciate our piece, hoping you would kindly discuss your thoughts in the comments section below.

Ripping his feelings every time she’s gone,
Reminiscing these moments every break of dawn,
Missing her like a crazy, why does she frown,
She’s Flying over mountains,When in the sea he drowned.

She wants to fly, to be with her lover,
Missing, magic moments together,
To give him warmth, in cold winter night,
Whilst Sun burning her weeping heart,

She left him, she is gone, with the colors he likes,
She played him so bad, she hit beautiful strikes.
He wished to be a part of her winning team,
He offered his life, of him she can’t even deem.

He walks away, believing she had swayed,
His devotion, message he could not convey,
As she moves forward, without turning around,
Her silent tears, and memory haunts,
Missing her lover, many words unspoken,
His gentle heart, she never forgotten.

He got himself listed in the worse categories,
Of Love, passion, sweet and bitter memories.
His love for her is just so abundant,
Even in death, to her love he is never reluctant.

Things that she missed, his untainted heart,
All she desires, he comes running pleasing her,
In quiet moment, she breaks apart,
Missing his warmth, when they were together…

by

BarryckR & Miskia

Twitter Correspondence

6.20.2010

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oness June 20, 2010 at 1:00 pm

yawn

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FHK June 20, 2010 at 4:40 pm

Love it!!!!

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barryckr June 21, 2010 at 4:34 am

@FHK Thank you Fahima for your Kind support.

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Aurora June 25, 2010 at 3:23 am

Barryck sweetie…

you know, it took me 3 times to read it.. the poem that you both write are so dear to me, which I’m experiencing right now and it’s hard for me to put in words..

that’s why it’s hard for me to find the right words to give to you…
it’s a very beautiful piece, Congrats to you both…

Drop of tears flow down my face,
as I read your words that are dear to me
my sense of love described perfectly,
speechless that all i can say.

Still holding my ground, as I read once more
the pain came back to me, just as the memories
my dear friend, you touch me with a poem
that always be inside my heart, when i think of my love

I LOVE THE POEM!

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Gino June 27, 2010 at 5:27 am

Majestueux! toujours un plaisir de lire tes poèmes..
Mágico.

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